Greenleaf Literary Services

Kind Words From a Few of My Clients . . .

“You are my third editor, and I cannot help thinking if only I had found you back when… Most important to me, you understand what I am trying to do. Your critique is insightful, and I am grateful for your help.”

Brogan Joe Murphy
Author of Pentimento Hearts

“Bill Greenleaf is a consummate professional at his craft. He gives new meaning to “meticulous” when it comes to grammatical and syntactical correctness. Better yet, Bill’s many improvements to my latest book, How Now, Norm’s Tao, were not only insightful, but were consistent with my off-beat sense of humor and irreverent literary style. If you want your book to be the very best it can be, give Bill Greenleaf a call today.”

Norm Spitzig
Mount Dora, Florida

“By following your suggestions about setting up scenes, the task of writing my novel is becoming much easier, and I’m sure the scenes will stick in the reader’s mind. In all my years of writing, I never noticed my weakness in this area, but now that you’ve shown me how to improve it, I’ll never forget it.”

David Montgomery
Grand Rapids, Michigan

“Just a note to say I am thrilled with the critique. I read it several times before beginning the revision. You gave me the concrete suggestions I needed to finish this novel.”

B. B. Davis
Santa Ana, California

“I have reviewed your comments and find that I cannot dispute a single one. The changes you suggested for the novel’s opening solved a problem I had struggled with. Thanks to you, I now have a far better place to start. I can’t begin to tell you how grateful I am for your complete and honest critique.”

Mary Millard
Portland, Oregon

“If I were a rich man, I’d be obliged to buy you a Mercedes, but as it is, you’ll have to be satisfied with my heartfelt thanks. Because of the foundation you gave me, and your clarifications when I had questions, concepts come to me when I need them, and I have a more automatic knowledge of how to handle the mechanics.”

Rudy Ferrari
Riverside, California

“I’ve read a lot of how-to books on writing, and even enrolled for a short time in a writing course, but you beat them all. Your patience and kind instruction gave me enough encouragement to see the story through to its end. For the first time, there’s more than just a glimmer of hope. With your help, I really believe that this time I can break through the publishing barrier.”

Gary Truman
Tahlequah, Oklahoma

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